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Engrave it;
write it with the blood
of a thousand victims;
tell my story because I need it;
tell the world,
otherwise
it would be uncomfortable
to just think of you.
Your heart would have
a totally different taste,
your soul would be set to waste;
write down
the endless poem
about a moment's heartache:
I lost my mind
just to find out
that several years
of self-development
won't tell me
what I need to hear,
won't give me
what I think I need.
I want you
as the reasonable proof
of what I am,
vexed and tormented
as you are,
heartbroken and alone
as you've always been.
I can't see you,
but still my mind
disrupts....
searching for the perfect
spiritual osmosis of souls,
trapped in crystal-bleeding tombs.
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I translated this one from the original italian one, I hope it's correct.
Enjoy.

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:iconvoldemort92:
I love it :nod: well done, scemotto ^__^

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Kommt die Kunde, daß ich bin gefallen,
Daß ich schlafe in der Meeresflut
Weine nicht um mich, mein Schatz, und denke:
Für das Vaterland da floß sein Blut.
:iconnocaster:
Awwww
Thank you.
I'm not gonna ask why you
like it, though...
:iconvoldemort92:
You're welcome ^^
yeah, you already know I can't tell you why I like your songs/poems...

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Kommt die Kunde, daß ich bin gefallen,
Daß ich schlafe in der Meeresflut
Weine nicht um mich, mein Schatz, und denke:
Für das Vaterland da floß sein Blut.
:iconthiswarisours:
I like this a lot. The emotion is palpable.

The translation was well done; it flows naturally.
:iconnocaster:
Thank you so much,
I really appreciate.
:iconerilisvampyre:
Like a burst of chaotic emotion...charging forth to meet whatever end is fated to be.

I love it.

--
~ That is not dead which can eternal lie
And with strange aeons even death may die. ~
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"A burst of chaotic emotion" is exactly what I felt when I wrote this.
Thanks a lot for the support.
:iconerilisvampyre:
You're welcome. ;)

--
~ That is not dead which can eternal lie
And with strange aeons even death may die. ~

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